Post by Orochimaru on Oct 3, 2007 11:12:51 GMT -5
*coughs*
Yes, people. We're all wrong here. Instead of giving you an example application, we're giving you the opposite. So down below is an example of what will get you rejected as soon as we see it.
Character's Full Name:
Mary Sue Zomg So Amazing the Third
Is the character a ninja?
No, the character is God. She is pwnsome and really awesome.
Character's Appearance:
*insert image here*
She is the most beautiful thing on earth, with pinkpurpleblackbluegreenfire hair, long beyond her ankles, and amazing. Her eyes change colors with her mood, or simply because she wants them to. She's perfect, ya rly. Anyone who looks at her instantly falls in love with her. Oh, and she also has wings, one is white and one is black. Or what the hell, they change colors at her will too.
Brief Character History:
*insert emo here*
*insert family killed after sealing a demon in her here*
*insert being hated by everyone and oh-so-sad when she just wanted to be loved here*
*insert major Hokage-level accomplishments at the age of minus ten here*
Oh yeah, and she's related to both Sasuke and Itachi, and Gaara, but she doesn't know it yet, oh angst.
Character's Starting Age:
12398419034739!, but she looks 15, seriously.
Character's Chakra Type:
FireWindWaterEarthLightningDarknessShadowsDeath.
Character's Starting Abilities:
*insert copy-paste of all the jutsu the Naruto world has ever seen, restricted or not here*
Can kill pplz just looking at them.
Can heal self and resurrect people. And self. Jesus had nothing on her, I tell you.
Kekkei Genkai:
Yes. Sharingan (with Mangekyou, too, definitely), Byakugan, Shikotsumyaku, all in one, and all at once. And she can copy anyone else's kekkei genkai too, with her new and more awesome version of Sharingan.
Role-Play Example:
Zomg, she like glared coldly at Itachi, and Itachi fainted, and then when he woke up he was in love with her, and so was everyone else.
Yes, people. We're all wrong here. Instead of giving you an example application, we're giving you the opposite. So down below is an example of what will get you rejected as soon as we see it.
Character's Full Name:
Mary Sue Zomg So Amazing the Third
Is the character a ninja?
No, the character is God. She is pwnsome and really awesome.
Character's Appearance:
*insert image here*
She is the most beautiful thing on earth, with pinkpurpleblackbluegreenfire hair, long beyond her ankles, and amazing. Her eyes change colors with her mood, or simply because she wants them to. She's perfect, ya rly. Anyone who looks at her instantly falls in love with her. Oh, and she also has wings, one is white and one is black. Or what the hell, they change colors at her will too.
Brief Character History:
*insert emo here*
*insert family killed after sealing a demon in her here*
*insert being hated by everyone and oh-so-sad when she just wanted to be loved here*
*insert major Hokage-level accomplishments at the age of minus ten here*
Oh yeah, and she's related to both Sasuke and Itachi, and Gaara, but she doesn't know it yet, oh angst.
Character's Starting Age:
12398419034739!, but she looks 15, seriously.
Character's Chakra Type:
FireWindWaterEarthLightningDarknessShadowsDeath.
Character's Starting Abilities:
*insert copy-paste of all the jutsu the Naruto world has ever seen, restricted or not here*
Can kill pplz just looking at them.
Can heal self and resurrect people. And self. Jesus had nothing on her, I tell you.
Kekkei Genkai:
Yes. Sharingan (with Mangekyou, too, definitely), Byakugan, Shikotsumyaku, all in one, and all at once. And she can copy anyone else's kekkei genkai too, with her new and more awesome version of Sharingan.
Role-Play Example:
Zomg, she like glared coldly at Itachi, and Itachi fainted, and then when he woke up he was in love with her, and so was everyone else.
